Wednesday, March 9, 2011
Journal Writer Week One
Hi my name is Zullo. I am building a military company called George Company. This company has at least at least 20 to 30 different squads. When i went to Korea the air and the smell of dead bodies was everywhere. I saw two of my soilders Coporal Albert Barnes and PFC Ralph Murphy die from a sniper in Inchon . Then we advanced on the road. I was nervous of all the jungle around because the enemy could be anywhere. Then we started taking fire from a small house. I was next to it and i told a private to throw a grenade in there but it landed right next to me. So i kicked it like a soccer ball into the house and then we had won that little battle. The private ran up to me and apologized and i was scared bc he had grenades near him and i was like "He's trying to kill me".
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i think you are missing about wut happened in the prologue. About his "death". I think it would make it more intresting.
ReplyDeletei believe you did a great job billy like how you wrote about his whole life pretty much but i thought you could have added about his ''death'' to then say how he wasn't dead.
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